a few opening lines (aka: correspondence 101)

“If you write to me, could you possibly seal your letter? Or if not, don’t mention the book, because I don’t want my servants to get to know all about that.”

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“I enclose with this letter some unpublished pages extracted from my forthcoming book which I should very much like to see appear in your review.”

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“The story is so well-known that the name of the fiancé will be obvious if I tell you that the lady in question is Madam Bischoffsheim…”

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“I should be most grateful if you would read this letter to the end, destroy it or send it back to me, and not breathe a word of it to anyone whatsoever.”

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“It was very nice of you to write to me about your marriage; it would have been nicer still if you had invited me to it.”

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“I send you herewith, in very inelegant form and on the paper which I use to light my anti-asthmatic powders—all that I have to hand—my warmest and most sincere congratulations on your wonderful prize.”

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“Although you abandon me I often look at your little face and think and think.”

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“I telephoned you last night at the Gil Blas.”

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“I’m already behindhand in thanking you for your beautiful letter and now I receive three cards.”

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“I should be infinitely grateful if you could tell me whether, in your opinion, this contract prevents me legally (without risk of a lawsuit, etc.) from publishing my second volume with another publisher.”

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“Thank you very much for your letter—one sentence was ravishing (crepuscular, etc.)…”

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“I’m genuinely sorry to keep bothering you, especially if you are still on holiday and would no doubt prefer to forget for a while that there is such a thing as a stock exchange.”

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“I should have preferred to tell you this in person.”

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“You said you would write to me, you have written to me, and I am amazed.”

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Opening lines to various letters, from Marcel Proust: Selected Letters, Volume Three, 1910 – 1917.
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2 thoughts on “a few opening lines (aka: correspondence 101)”

  1. These are fascinating peeks into his past.

    I loved this one: “It was very nice of you to write to me about your marriage; it would have been nicer still if you had invited me to it.”

    In my mind he wrote the letter to a nephew, or a friend who had distanced himself from him. It’s a backhanded congratulations, something that puts the letter writer in a defensive position. As the kids would say today, “Awkward.”

    1. My favourite was this:

      “I send you herewith, in very inelegant form and on the paper which I use to light my anti-asthmatic powders—all that I have to hand—my warmest and most sincere congratulations on your wonderful prize.”

      Was he so excited at the news of his friend’s prize that he scribbled a note on the first available thing?
      Or a master at subtle digs…

      The latter makes me happier. (;

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